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Old 09-18-2014, 08:39 PM   #2
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In massive strains, the acid rains were onyx petrol, Turkish coffee
never served with malt cream, spawning utility worker crossbreeds
-like the rhyme scheme here compared to the rest above it

deltas were charred skulls with serpents crawling out
-whoa

another stand out to me...

The universe doesn't see a gray area since it's colorblind

vocab in this was off the chains...story was on point..

kinda stretched out for my liking wit' the lines....but the content brought it all together

good drop
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