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08-28-2014, 12:31 PM
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listen , stinton....a little bland and rough around the edges comes off like you had a bunch of web pages open next to eachother at the same time looking up stats and what not, and u usin too much words like "certainly, mirror images, boasts,notoriously." basically ur sayin way too much in all ur sentences
"When Renan Barao squares off against T.J. Dillashaw in the UFC 177 main event on Saturday at the Sleep Train Arena in Sacramento, Calif., it will be in the unfamiliar blue corner" just say wen renan barao squares off and dillashaw at the UFC 177 main event on Saturday, he wil be in the unfamilar blue corner. stop puttin all those big ass words in there, i was noticing end rhymes n shit too. one of them paragraphs came off like an open mic keystyle the tale of the tape pictures were cool and I like the final word you can probably give jerry springer a run for his money |
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