Check out this article I wrote for sherdog for UFC 177
 

http://www.sherdog.com/news/articles...-Barao-2-72683


Lmk what you think, my first article for them.

writing about strong midgets fighting each other...pretty dece

how much did they pay u for that quickie

listen , stinton....a little bland and rough around the edges comes off like you had a bunch of web pages open next to eachother at the same time looking up stats and what not, and u usin too much words like "certainly, mirror images, boasts,notoriously." basically ur sayin way too much in all ur sentences

"When Renan Barao squares off against T.J. Dillashaw in the UFC 177 main event on Saturday at the Sleep Train Arena in Sacramento, Calif., it will be in the unfamiliar blue corner"

just say wen renan barao squares off and dillashaw at the UFC 177 main event on Saturday, he wil be in the unfamilar blue corner. stop puttin all those big ass words in there, i was noticing end rhymes n shit too. one of them paragraphs came off like an open mic keystyle

the tale of the tape pictures were cool and I like the final word you can probably give jerry springer a run for his money

Cool

I thought tht was SportsScience for a lil while there...

Pretty cool.

This line was sounded a little too mechanical. Good job though, I read a lot of Sherdog articles.

This is mad cool man, props

:)

thanks for reading, everyone
@Diode @Beyond @Certain @big baby @anyone else who is interested

Thought it was good.

Going to be hard for Barao to win the rematch, my money's on Ted Jones.

you want feedback on this?

:-(

Sorry 4 ur loss oats

Sure, though I posted it more to say hey check out something I wrote.

@El Pancake I don't get it :-/

Barao is out.

holy shit, I had no idea lol. good thing my article got published before he was out. In a way this fight just got way more interesting though, wasn't too pumped on seeing this rematch.

It happened an hour ago.

I had money riding on Dillashaw, not happy about this.

Who is TJ fighting

Joe Soto.

Joe Soto is +700 underdog. If I was a betting man, I'd put money on that. former bellator champ, in shape, plus dillashaw has prepared for a very different fighter.