The clothes I was raptured in

Zen · 07-27-2014, 03:10 PM

Rubix cube a noob with rude permuations
Elusive clues superglued to space stations
Ruse for rubes and fools who choose mazes
Loosening lubes ooze their smooth graces
Its dues to snooze on the WHO? Of true ancients
Know just what your pain is.
^^I really liked this section for the flow.

I will say that the wording messed up the flow a little bit in the first half but for the most part I enjoyed this. Especially what I quoted above because it was almost a tongue twister. Cool stuff.

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07-27-2014, 03:10 PM	#16
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Rubix cube a noob with rude permuations Elusive clues superglued to space stations Ruse for rubes and fools who choose mazes Loosening lubes ooze their smooth graces Its dues to snooze on the WHO? Of true ancients Know just what your pain is. ^^I really liked this section for the flow. I will say that the wording messed up the flow a little bit in the first half but for the most part I enjoyed this. Especially what I quoted above because it was almost a tongue twister. Cool stuff.