Oatmeal (Malachi & Paradigm)

Vulgar · 07-25-2014, 11:33 PM

This was alright.

And since a minor ive been seein these goals
The troubled soul
^This was the best part because you were honest. The rest was sort of contrived for me. Couldn't get into it but not bad, overall.

Para

Cool verse, I like the concepts you play around with. This was decent.

Caught ya mom blowing me on the stairs; bout to bang hoe
next step something rose in her mouth like I was teaching her to tango
^Hah

Paradigm · 07-26-2014, 05:09 AM

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Originally Posted by Vulgar

This was alright.

And since a minor ive been seein these goals
The troubled soul
^This was the best part because you were honest. The rest was sort of contrived for me. Couldn't get into it but not bad, overall.

Para

Cool verse, I like the concepts you play around with. This was decent.

Caught ya mom blowing me on the stairs; bout to bang hoe
next step something rose in her mouth like I was teaching her to tango
^Hah

Word. I like that creative stuff. We need to get in a Group Therapy pt II soon. @Neighbor

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07-25-2014, 11:33 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	This was alright. And since a minor ive been seein these goals The troubled soul ^This was the best part because you were honest. The rest was sort of contrived for me. Couldn't get into it but not bad, overall. Para Cool verse, I like the concepts you play around with. This was decent. Caught ya mom blowing me on the stairs; bout to bang hoe next step something rose in her mouth like I was teaching her to tango ^Hah