Tabula Rasa

Witty · 07-24-2014, 06:15 PM

Yo this was crazy, I'm too high for a full breakdown but I want you to know that this was crazy.

Enjoyed it more than I've enjoyed a piece in a while, not to say I haven't read dope pieces but I really fucked with the style of this one, I like the schemes you used, what you said was dope and the honesty was appreciated as always, this was fire to me, keep doing you man.

Lines 5 & 6 don't fit tho, that's really the only thing that stood out to me as a negative against this piece.

07-24-2014, 06:15 PM	#11
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Yo this was crazy, I'm too high for a full breakdown but I want you to know that this was crazy. Enjoyed it more than I've enjoyed a piece in a while, not to say I haven't read dope pieces but I really fucked with the style of this one, I like the schemes you used, what you said was dope and the honesty was appreciated as always, this was fire to me, keep doing you man. Lines 5 & 6 don't fit tho, that's really the only thing that stood out to me as a negative against this piece. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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