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07-24-2014, 01:38 AM
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adonis, your first line was coo then the second line got too wordy
i had to read it twice to get it and it was more like a statement rather than a punch. good job jilti, wasnt really feeling this either but, it was simple, original and delivered well. just had no type of impact for me. good job vote: jilti
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