Adonis vs. jilti - [Jiliti wins]
 

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@Adonis @jilti

Lick ass

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You can out run a name play by creating such a whack moniker, but fuck your agility.
You can't out run your lack of ability to throw a soft jab to so much as tickle me lyrically.

Adonis supposed to be a mobster boss,ur just an imposter
if he's calling shots from the top, its to see who gets the ball first

Adonis gave it a good shot but I have jil taking this. Adonis, next time I would focus on one concept. Build on it. Structure ur bar around it, and make sure the rhyme scheme delivers it. Jil, I think that maybe focusing ur attention on adding subtle references to your main concept would help alot for the finish.

v-jil

Adonis, solid attempt here but your punch really lacked any sting. You could have came much harder off that set up, which was pretty solid to start. jilti, you had an okay bar overall. It wasn't bad, but it also wasn't good. Just okay. Better concept than your opponent though, and a bit more sting as well. Close.

MVGT: jilti. Good job by both competitors.

adonis, your first line was coo then the second line got too wordy
i had to read it twice to get it and it was more like a statement
rather than a punch. good job


jilti, wasnt really feeling this either but, it was simple, original and
delivered well. just had no type of impact for me. good job

vote: jilti

Adonis was too wordy and i didnt really get a punch from your bar.
Jiltil line was decent

V/ Jilt

Adonis, you're almost there. like, ur flow was solid, but the actual punch just fell flat
the setup hit harder than the punchline did
jilti was decent

v/jilt

Adon . I actually liked your wording. It was clean. Unfortunately n ironically was a jab punch wise.

Jil. Calling shot wp is played.

I think this is a draw.

Adonis needed to clean his bar up.

Have the Jil here

6-0 jilti