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H4ZE · 07-22-2014, 02:52 PM

This was great, word choice was properly selected to really get the point across and make the imagery vivid, I could picture this in my head as I read it. Schemes were all dope the whole way through as well as the flow which rolled off of my.tounge as I read it aloud. Definitely a dope piece, the way you put your thoughts and emotions down on this piece really made it great. I was feeling the topic. Great work.
Keep writing and stay blessed.
Peace.

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07-22-2014, 02:52 PM	#13
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	This was great, word choice was properly selected to really get the point across and make the imagery vivid, I could picture this in my head as I read it. Schemes were all dope the whole way through as well as the flow which rolled off of my.tounge as I read it aloud. Definitely a dope piece, the way you put your thoughts and emotions down on this piece really made it great. I was feeling the topic. Great work. Keep writing and stay blessed. Peace.