cyph her, interesting piece. Had a poetic feel especially the way you have it broken in stanzas of four lines. There were a few early hiccups vocab wise (brang) that threw me off a bit but it got easier as I continued reading. Story was okay. A romance type of thing, read very delicately. Certain, you went a similar direction as well here. This is probably your best pieces this season imo. It had everything one could expect from a Certain piece. Very smooth read, good use of language, tightly knit. In comparison to your opponent I felt your story overall was better written and had more depth.
MVGT: Certain. Good job by both competitors.
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