Week 14: 5. Vividlyvague (7-5) vs. 6. cyph her (1-1) \\ cyph her wins 7-0

Soulstice · 06-02-2014, 12:05 AM

cyph - your verse last week really caught me with the hook. very poetic, i was expecting a similiar effort but you switched up the style in my eyes. it was however, still personal and self-reflecting. thats always a good approach to a verse. captures emotion, and you can usei magery in a unique way. i like your style

viv - well.. this seems unfinished. do i need to really comment?

v - cyph. wish you signed in sooner but i guess you could maybe make playoffs. idk

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06-02-2014, 12:05 AM	#5
Soulstice native system Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 387 Battle Record: 18-21 Champed - Short-Verse Topical Rep Power: 4453411	cyph - your verse last week really caught me with the hook. very poetic, i was expecting a similiar effort but you switched up the style in my eyes. it was however, still personal and self-reflecting. thats always a good approach to a verse. captures emotion, and you can usei magery in a unique way. i like your style viv - well.. this seems unfinished. do i need to really comment? v - cyph. wish you signed in sooner but i guess you could maybe make playoffs. idk