Week 13: 11. Zenland (1-1) vs. 12. cyph her (0-1) \\ cyph her wins 7-1

Frank · 05-26-2014, 12:09 AM

Cyph her - This was aiiight considering your a girl....I feel like giving you a pass cause I can't help but picture your tender feminine voice behind this piece. Your easy going structure read nonchalantly poetic and pleasantly underwhelming which is a joy in this league of over bearing mind fucked lyricism.

Zenland - I think you may have toned down the scheming either because you were unmotivated or just because you didn't want to do your girl like that. The story was pretty basic but your writing seemed as if you were drawing from real life experiences and that is what your writing has been missing imo.

MVGT Cyph her

05-26-2014, 12:09 AM	#8
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Cyph her - This was aiiight considering your a girl....I feel like giving you a pass cause I can't help but picture your tender feminine voice behind this piece. Your easy going structure read nonchalantly poetic and pleasantly underwhelming which is a joy in this league of over bearing mind fucked lyricism. Zenland - I think you may have toned down the scheming either because you were unmotivated or just because you didn't want to do your girl like that. The story was pretty basic but your writing seemed as if you were drawing from real life experiences and that is what your writing has been missing imo. MVGT Cyph her __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 05-26-2014 at 12:13 AM.

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