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Old 05-25-2014, 03:44 PM   #6
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cyph her - copy+paste what I said about the tone of Adonis' verse this week basically, but yeah - an understated implication attached to careful movement. Very inwardly directed, the textbook self-fixated / doomed-by-one's-heritage vantage of an alcoholic I guess.

Zenland - more addict melodrama, with more or less accurate depictions of the heightened moments of tension that one has to deal with (if you wanted to insert some more realer-than-reality stuff you could've gone with an example of sucking dick for drugs, that one always gets the audience). Crisp rhymes

I vote cyph her based on a more (emotionally) logically kept-together product. Interesting reads from both.
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