Week 13: 9. Vividlyvague (6-5) vs. 10. timeless (6-6) \\ Vividlyvague wins 5-0

cyph her · 05-24-2014, 07:51 PM

I'm not a huge fan of conversation in text.. Seems to awkwardly add pauses imo. But since both went this route, it evens the playing field. I liked timeless' idea, but I didn't feel like it was executed as well as it could have been. The development of the story seemed to lack. Love the storyline of VV's verse. The use of vocabulary definitely elevated an already well thought out story. The use of imagery, however infrequent made the story come alive. V-VV

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05-24-2014, 07:51 PM	#6
cyph her decept the con Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 126 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	I'm not a huge fan of conversation in text.. Seems to awkwardly add pauses imo. But since both went this route, it evens the playing field. I liked timeless' idea, but I didn't feel like it was executed as well as it could have been. The development of the story seemed to lack. Love the storyline of VV's verse. The use of vocabulary definitely elevated an already well thought out story. The use of imagery, however infrequent made the story come alive. V-VV