dead man - DELIRIUM

e11even · 04-03-2014, 07:19 PM

From "i've got nothing left to lose. only coffins to use" til the last line was what appealed to me most. I don't read you much, but I like how deliberate your switches in thought are. It comes off as freestyle-ish, but its not quite a train of thought piece. It feels more thoughtful and premeditated, yet not try-hard. I saw glimpses of what i assume is your life and i really like how these tidbits are sprinkled throughout.

I try to downplay hype tbh, but i think i'll read you more.

04-03-2014, 07:19 PM	#14
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	From "i've got nothing left to lose. only coffins to use" til the last line was what appealed to me most. I don't read you much, but I like how deliberate your switches in thought are. It comes off as freestyle-ish, but its not quite a train of thought piece. It feels more thoughtful and premeditated, yet not try-hard. I saw glimpses of what i assume is your life and i really like how these tidbits are sprinkled throughout. I try to downplay hype tbh, but i think i'll read you more. __________________ Ahem.

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