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Old 02-11-2014, 04:45 PM   #1
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Natural is known to fuck with pussies without consent, its legit.
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Shut up nigma.
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Old 02-12-2014, 12:30 AM   #3
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Shut up nigma.
You suck Dick for a living.
Your underdeveloped insult falls flat against the commonly known fact that your women skills are SO fucking pathetic that you had to rape a bitch. And you aren't even a good rapist, cause you got caught.. For shame

Anyways!!!

Pat, I felt the piece started off a bit slowly, you started hitting your pace a few bars in and then murdered it, really enjoyed this section:

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I’m kidding, I’m average, not extreme. But getting the cash ain’t hard for me
Shit on the rap game, cop some feces. I’m different that way, an awkward species
My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete
I’m silly with nouns, drop a beat and really get down. Lava deep
Illy with sounds obviously killing you clowns, comically.
Like Gilligan’s Island ya’ll is beached. While I’m spitting a mile of solid sea
The spillage could drown a soccer field and fill in surrounding properties
I’m liquid just dousing causing scenes, you spitting a drought see, hardly leak
Felt you began expanding/transitioning concepts well and were on par with the expected syllable game you bring, some enjoyable writing right here. Hitting your stride the hardest on the gilligans island bar but this whole section was smooth as fuck. Ending wasn't too far behind. Balsamic is a vinegar not a wine tho? Isn't it? Wine in ya sentence/Vagina infections was LOL tho, good shit mango sry for the delayed feed
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