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Not really into the religious pun, but the rest of it was okay I guess. I thought there were a few parts that didn't even make sense. For example the dictionary part were you being sarcastic, or literal? Cause you would think people who look words up have a bigger vocabulary and I am not sure how that would make them cool. There were parts that seemed to flow really well though. Although you really could do better though I think. I really expected more from someone of such high stature... Just seemed liked you just threw this one together quick?
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