Cuddle farts..
 

Hi
Dis wise
I'm always stuck in sweats- I mean something that's dark
They say genius only needs a couple of sparks
I do NOTHING with smarts, but
Like, HELLLLLLOOOOOOO
You're drowning! &..still judging the ark?
This the x-ray gallery. Rupturing art
Pfft Women? Survival of the fittest. Couples that spar
You ever snag a gal, try to cuddle then fart?
And act like the chair had a squeaky structure or part?
Yeah lol worst case, birth day wishes & dirty dishes
& the god, where will my life be at 30 image
Yo what's that shit by my lip. It ain't herpes.. Is it?
Yeah fuck it, now everyone's getting all wordy, specific
Like that's the secret substance for herding your interest
Her/he- WHAT IS IT? A dude or a chick?
We call them TG's. You stupid or Ig?
Oh, Well thank god it look the same, grooving their hips
Ewwws, that's just sick. The imagery was gruesome, you.
Dictionary's are for faggots who want to seem cool
Jk. Srs. That was rude. They're prob's a think-tool
Raise your hand if you possess that I wanna do laundry fuel
Me neitherz. Going commando when out of boxer briefs rules
Oh you spit gross right? That bodily fluids? Well it's probably flu
You broke one brick and that karate chi grew
Yo hold up. You c dat bish? Butt like a pottery spool?
Yeah yeah. Took Molly. Good golly, greed, jewels
Ain't wore earings since I lost one down the drain
Sometimes.. I..just..
Wear a blindfold. Close the curtains & count the rain
But if I know the person. I swear I'll go ballistic
Psyche.. My synchronized silhouettes slap shadows that stall
Fucking bitch. Argue w/u? MISEWELL SHOUT AT A WALL

I sometimes think you're a caricature of yourself being a caricature of yourself. Not saying I don't enjoy, or think you're skilled. Just wish you would apply your skillset to something different without your original influence of self being bound to it. Hard to describe, but oh well. Dope.

Not really into the religious pun, but the rest of it was okay I guess. I thought there were a few parts that didn't even make sense. For example the dictionary part were you being sarcastic, or literal? Cause you would think people who look words up have a bigger vocabulary and I am not sure how that would make them cool. There were parts that seemed to flow really well though. Although you really could do better though I think. I really expected more from someone of such high stature... Just seemed liked you just threw this one together quick?

Stupid fucking farts

i think you should write to a beat, like your next verse. just to see you know? maybe it will direct these thoughts in a more linear way. not to say anything wrong with this style of rap. but, yeah id listen to the beat and read along man just sayin. i liked this

They say genius only needs a couple of sparks

^^True dat.

Pfft Women? Survival of the fittest. Couples that spar
You ever snag a gal, try to cuddle then fart?
And act like the chair had a squeaky structure or part?

^^Lol.

Cool read...flow was straight, content be decent and I got a chuckle from your new name lol...enjoyable little flex man.

& thanks for the feed it's appreciated,
Stay upwards.

wtf, thought i fed this already.

anyways i lol'd a few times during this. well i guess not really l o l but like said ha in my own head. im pretty sure u wrote this super fast. but there were still lots of good parts. suuper original as always with the wording the first part hellllooooooo ahahha reminded me of a little kid. the ark line was good. a bunch of good little sections. would be SICK to see one that is straight fire all the way through with no lulls. nah'mean?? scheming, rhyming always awesome. the main reason i always peep ur stuff. really cool there as uj. p.s. ur pic battle thing with the 4 sluts was dope. camera presence line KILLED it. one of the best things ive ever seen from u actually man. keep at it. maybe u can pull of some upsets!

keystyle crew checking in.

Yeah lol worst case, birth day wishes & dirty dishes
& the god, where will my life be at 30 image
Yo what's that shit by my lip. It ain't herpes.. Is it?
Yeah fuck it, now everyone's getting all wordy, specific

WiZe? that wise?

This piece was different.. I think you have some skill man, i'd like to see something more serious from you, i'd like to see you stick with a topic as well.. sometimes I think you jump around too much with abstract bars an shit.

This piece was ight, don't get me wrong. Im just saying I think you a more serious/artistic approach would bring your writing to another level.

I'd like you to not tell me wtf to do. Topics are for faggots. Well, most of them.

& here's a topical for your needy-ass. Your welcome.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=44643

^^ lmao the bolded part made me chuckle because I've been there done that

but this was a fun read and the quoted part was my favorite part.
it felt very random and thoughts were going everywhere and it all fit together pretty well.


nice drop Whys.

Peace.

only i can request that from him because im da bb

Did I hit a nerve? Damn dude.. I didn't tell you what to do at all, in fact I told you it was a decent piece.. stop being such a bitch and take a damn compliment when it's given to you.

You were giving me back-handed compliments obviously. It's fine. I could really give a ton of fucks. Who are you anyways?

I have worked in an office of some sort for most of my adult life and have developed unbelievable flatulence control.

Dope piece tho...read it a few days ago, then again about an hour ago, killed it.

^Best bit.