Ryan 12 vs H4ZE - RYAN WINS

Sentex · 01-17-2014, 07:22 PM

H4ZE, I'm guessing you are new to text battles. The problem with your verse is that it looks like you're rhyming for the sake of it. It doesn't look like there is any intent in the words, so calling somebody wack is the most basic of insults in a battle, so if you want to go down that route you have to be a lot more creative. On this occasion you didn't have anything that was really personal, or hard hitting, or creative conceptually to be a strong battle verse. Keep at it though man!

Ryan had the overall better verse -- the punchlines connected, strong enough verse to beat what was put in front of him.

Vote - Ryan12.

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01-17-2014, 07:22 PM	#11
Sentex Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Land of the Loose Tooth Posts: 107 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 36	H4ZE, I'm guessing you are new to text battles. The problem with your verse is that it looks like you're rhyming for the sake of it. It doesn't look like there is any intent in the words, so calling somebody wack is the most basic of insults in a battle, so if you want to go down that route you have to be a lot more creative. On this occasion you didn't have anything that was really personal, or hard hitting, or creative conceptually to be a strong battle verse. Keep at it though man! Ryan had the overall better verse -- the punchlines connected, strong enough verse to beat what was put in front of him. Vote - Ryan12.