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Ryan 12 vs H4ZE - RYAN WINS

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Alright sorry for being late I havent even written anything for this but ill try to key up somthing

Haha,this kid is wack,yet ive heard the ryan kills
But is rhymes are all garbage,where the fuck are ryans skills?

Theres no chance he'll win this, he should leave this fucking site
Cuz hes shit,ryan is doing nothing tight

Just quit rap! Stupid bitch ass retarted kid
Your raps have been garbage since the day that you started them

Your rhymin is straight wack,and your sayin youve come to destroy me?
But im not wack,unlike all of your opponents before me

This whole site bores me! But ryans the worst
He couldnt think up a diss to win this if he had all the time on the earth
@Ryan 12

gonna need an ext plz

This guy is legit homo, a faggot who's gay as fuck
I ain't talking about desert toppings when I say 'on men' is the only time Hazelnut
He knows its the end, so watch closely to this kid pray
You'll see him place his hands together when it comes to 12 like a clock @ midday
Give me 1n1 and I'll make 2 lemons, cuz I actually listened to teachers
Give H 1n1 and the only thing he'll add is that to his growing list of diseases
Your whore gobbled my dick & stomached it whole,
she's an Xbox... Vibrate enhances the play but I remain the 1 in control
I'm dope as fuck, known to roam with the shotty
Ironic how I didnt break a sweat but everything bone in your body

Meh. Not a great battle. H4ze just kinda kept saying Ryan was wack in different ways lol. No real thought behind any of it.

Ryan had much more thought behind his lines. That Xbox line was pretty cool, the Hazelnut was worded weird, and "on men" is a stretch for almond, but he attempted punches.

Vote- Ryan

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Originally Posted by Tic Tac (Post 254136)

thaks for the vote

but "on men" wasnt a wp for almond lol the only wp there was hazelnut/haze'll nut

@H4ZE you have to vote on 2 battles then put links to your votes in this thread

H4ZE, I'm guessing you are new to text battles. The problem with your verse is that it looks like you're rhyming for the sake of it. It doesn't look like there is any intent in the words, so calling somebody wack is the most basic of insults in a battle, so if you want to go down that route you have to be a lot more creative. On this occasion you didn't have anything that was really personal, or hard hitting, or creative conceptually to be a strong battle verse. Keep at it though man!

Ryan had the overall better verse -- the punchlines connected, strong enough verse to beat what was put in front of him.

Vote - Ryan12.

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Originally Posted by H4ZE (Post 252441)

Alright sorry for being late I havent even written anything for this but ill try to key up somthing

Haha,this kid is wack,yet ive heard the ryan kills
But is rhymes are all garbage,where the fuck are ryans skills?

Way too generic.

Theres no chance he'll win this, he should leave this fucking site
Cuz hes shit,ryan is doing nothing tight

Worse than the first bar.

Just quit rap! Stupid bitch ass retarted kid
Your raps have been garbage since the day that you started them

Same as the other two.

Your rhymin is straight wack,and your sayin youve come to destroy me?
But im not wack,unlike all of your opponents before me

No.

This whole site bores me! But ryans the worst
He couldnt think up a diss to win this if he had all the time on the earth

No.
@Ryan 12

Quintessential noobie verse.

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Originally Posted by Ryan 12 (Post 252456)

This guy is legit homo, a faggot who's gay as fuck
I ain't talking about desert toppings when I say 'on men' is the only time Hazelnut

a little forced but ok.

He knows its the end, so watch closely to this kid pray
You'll see him place his hands together when it comes to 12 like a clock @ midday

played. any type of clock punch. played.

Give me 1n1 and I'll make 2 lemons, cuz I actually listened to teachers
Give H 1n1 and the only thing he'll add is that to his growing list of diseases

lol ok. kind of dated but i liked it.

Your whore gobbled my dick & stomached it whole,
she's an Xbox... Vibrate enhances the play but I remain the 1 in control

nah

I'm dope as fuck, known to roam with the shotty
Ironic how I didnt break a sweat but everything bone in your body

everything should be every, right? decent closer though

ok verse. played to the level of your opponent kind of.

ryan's done better than this but haze was not good. at all.

v/ryan

Haha. Aight. Whatever. I know this battle was shitty for me. Ive done way better on LA.
This was just a keystyle and im nee to battling.
But good shit ryan. And thanks for voting guys.

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Originally Posted by H4ZE (Post 255500)

Haha. Aight. Whatever. I know this battle was shitty for me. Ive done way better on LA.
This was just a keystyle and im nee to battling.
But good shit ryan. And thanks for voting guys.

We are happy to have you here and i hope to see more from you in here or in the league, for real

But links tho

He knows its the end, so watch closely to this kid pray
You'll see him place his hands together when it comes to 12 like a clock @ midday

vote - haze

just saying.

lol jk

haze had no punches.... ryan obviously had better verse with punches wordplay nameplay etc.

4-0

up

@H4ZE

thanks GET YOUR VOTE IN PLEASE

Ya...H4ZE has done way better on LA

Will update recs tonight