The land before time

[Just Write]

For what it was this was coo. Kinda like little random jots. I do the same thing all the tume. I probably have a hundred unfinished pieces lol. There were some parts where it seemed like you rhymed just to rhyme i.e. the sabertooth/ away a spaceship flew but i did see in another post you say you were shakin the cobwebs so i feel it. Middle portion was my fav. Post a more complete piece and ill peep. Stay up