The land before time
 

Just a little something I started today.. Not to sure where i'm going with it exactly. Anyways here it is.

The land before time

This story is about the days of my youth,
From which mordern famous fables grew,
When beast walked land.. In form of a Sabertooth,
Away the space ship flew,
Awaken was histories most famous brute,
Exiled. Enslaved in a waste land was Mason's doom,
My legacy graces faces of caves in ancient ruins,

If you can believe.. Before Christ or glorious knights,
Stood me.. Rock in hand forging a mic,
Times forgotten man, the stories wiped,
Lost in sand was this warriors life,

What they mustered up, than called it war,
I was covered up when the cult was formed and all had sworn,
A one man army facing the dullest swords,

For what it was this was coo. Kinda like little random jots. I do the same thing all the tume. I probably have a hundred unfinished pieces lol. There were some parts where it seemed like you rhymed just to rhyme i.e. the sabertooth/ away a spaceship flew but i did see in another post you say you were shakin the cobwebs so i feel it. Middle portion was my fav. Post a more complete piece and ill peep. Stay up

Sabertooth/spaceship flew was my favorite part of this. Very cool. May come back and drop more thoughts but yeah you should continue this.

really enjoyed this. the flow was awesome. content wise it was dope. finish it man. this would be a really good completed piece.

^^Nice avy lol.

Pretty cool verse you have so far, obviously dropped this to get some feed on the direction it's goin' in or what not...which a lot of others should take note of before postin' up 50 lines of poo...let me know when shits finished and I'll peep the rest fam.

Stay up with it.