monika,

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Originally Posted by Certain

You've improved a lot even in the past five months.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9277

wow tho

all that piece needed was some more line breaks. I thought that piece was super sxc and also metaphorically sound.

but maybe not as much as Hide&Seek (it was about Shadow of the Colossus and attached themes srs)

if you really wanna cringe at newbie writing, open up my archives.... which i refuse to prune to make myself seem like a good writer


EDIT: i freepost like a motherfucker. brb feeding people