The Book of Enoch

[Angkor]

returning feed.

Very creative idea here.

From my understanding of the book of Enoch, it's an (often) inadmissible chapter in the Old Testament. It tells of a prophet who was granted permission to see the full glory of Heaven, lol. The chapter further went to tell of the assistance of the Sons of God (Angels) to mankind, resulting in a whole bunch of civilized advancement. Somewhere along the line, these Sons of God mated with the daughters of man resulting in unholy abominations call Nephilim...lol...a very colorful chapter indeed.

I dug what u did with the crux of that story. Its clear what you were trying to do according to passages like these:

As the citizens explode with growth the clinics paved insane traits
Crafting instruments of stone to clone as mimics to our brainwaves
To create slaves the safe way... Producing laws thats flawed with tricks
They introduced economy and fathered it, locked them into jobs like prison

the comparative examination between Biblical parables and modern society isn't lost here - ultimately asking what the price of economical, political, technological advancement is. Very nice.

Flow was a little uneven imo. Some of the rhymings were a bit stretch (gorgeous/worship). But all in all, this was an enjoyable piece, my dude. salute.