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12-03-2013, 02:18 AM
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The COAT...
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lol thank you, I could probably add a few lines in the ending for clarity
its a former army person with suppressed memories who decides to seek psychiatric help. his talker induces him into a dream which helps him realize that he was a captain who lead his troops into a slaughter or somethin
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