RPK (3-1) vs. Flo Real (2-1) RPK WINS

[Dominate]

My concepts being used on you such a waste fam*
Your a larger waste of space then your sig of the Mojave waste land
OK. Sig/avvy flips usually need a really harsh punch or really dope wp to be good. This was aight..
way you were frontin for this fight I thought, yo who is this dude?
But your a nobody! which is why only 3 people have ever mentioned you
cool. Bit obv
He loves playing games - just look at his obsession with fall out
I play wit ya ho an if I do well it's da first letter in ya name she calls out*
"R"? OK
Yo I'm firing on all cylinders son*facing me what you expect bitch,
He's on a *suicide mission shootin himself like his Facebook pics *
what fb pics?
I'll tie a chain around your neck an strangle you to death
You'll choke! An not cus I'm leavin you*struggling to catch your breath*
almost..

not bad dude... keep writing, you'll get better. Try to rhyme more than one syllable, in a text verse it makes it flow better for the person reading it and gives it more swag... and that can make punches come off harder



u don't stand a chance with me,I'm fit to teach u a lesson
I'm ensured to kill u first in a battle,Flo...u should know I'm Progressive
didn't get it, did a quick google... something about pokemon? I'll just assume a connection between flo & progressive... which makes it an OK nameflip but would been better if you coulda worked 'progressive' into a diss against him instead of a self hype type of thing
This fag has no aggression,u won't see this dude murk me
How could he get angry...Rayge wouldn't even show in the Noob Tourney
cool personal. set up well for the wp... maybe a reference to 'ppl dont consider u worth showing for' or something to aid the punch
I'm known for murders,victims get lost in the goryness
I'll leave u deaded when I Run the Blade...call me Oscar Pistorius
good swag but not a hard hitting line
Getting tutored isn't helping,nothing u learned can prepare ya
Its ironic ur tutored by Nik...and u got concepts from his era
heh, cool
U ain't got no dope plays,plus i think ur flow's gay
I don't even need a punchline for this...bitch,u lost to Obey
yeah, not bad


good swag throughout. Couple cool lines in there. Keep writing.


I actually came to this thread bc I've seen Flo posting in discussion and he seems like quite an amiable young chap so I wanted to vote for him but after the breakdown I'm forced to conclude that RPK got it

v/ RPK