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11-14-2013, 05:58 PM
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decent execution. that's probably what this verse outlines, an execution in transitional rhyme stanza. which is ok, to me. the lines were a little short for my taste, preferably dishing out a bit more by saying less would be the perfect compliment or advice here, though i seek to give the former.
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