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Now....SIT YOUR ASS DOWN
Part of the history, the misery in their eyes
I can hear it in their cries, I filtered their demise captured it on film, then sold it, scripted it like... like it was in my position to sit & listen to the lies I'm, on a mission to enterprise build up my position, then live in the sky if you are against it, you're missing the surprise just look at them, those instruments of mine as they follow, react to the submission admit it, all that they are missing is some pri-de how could they go on living, dismissing it tonight? because their actions are the same, they sat and they praised they clapped and they raised their glasses to say? "Congratulations! I'm glad it happened this way" they were so happy, til' they banned it and they prayed that no other could reenact this apraise I'm surprised that they created factions for it today that most don't see the actions they create they sat, watched, and fastened their complaints stayed strapped in, & left their imagination to play but never sought truth you got to...be kidding I solved you I broke you down then bought you sent you out, took what you had so you could....watch...you... I'm so thoughtful, so great you are so obtuse the angle I been coming at would surely awaken and haunt you break the support that your own perception has brought you I'm sorry for this broadcast & all I forgot to... do...but I'm here now, and all I really want is you... to realize the depiction is all about lost truths keeping your change in dreams like a lost tooth a hunger for more, til' you couldn't chomp through to the point all you feel is a need for an apostle a God to, awaken you again and take all you fought through forgive you when all you had was....Shocked views... let the screen replay it for you... because after the shows over....I'll still adore you |
Dope shit. Your transitions are pretty slick these days. Worked out a lot of glitches in your wording and your syllable matching to.. from what I can remember anyway. Seems more smooth now, imo. Good read here (
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it kept me reading and intrigued. good show, sir.
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I almost called it George Romero but would that be too obvious?
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It was only a shortcut
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Enjoyed the read. Dope flow and a natural progression of your piece until the closure came along and I found myself nodding to the shit you were saying. Keep postin'!
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Its all in the execution
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decent execution. that's probably what this verse outlines, an execution in transitional rhyme stanza. which is ok, to me. the lines were a little short for my taste, preferably dishing out a bit more by saying less would be the perfect compliment or advice here, though i seek to give the former.
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Werd
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