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[CopyPat]

i got you objective. thanks for the legit feed on my shit. i guarantee if ur a fan of my regular style u will like my boss linguist one alot better, go peep it.

aight so yeah i clicked this long ago, saw the picture, skimmed the verse then instantly closed it.. i just could not be bothered to give a shit about other peoples relationships or lovey dovey shit on the internet... u know? the sole reason i am attempting to give u any sort of feed now is cause i respect ur feed on my other piece and i want u to check my newest one. for ME, i would just never read anything like this, like i said. its just too much poetry... that aint why im on this site. im all about the rap and the flow and the scheming and the wordplay and syllable shitting. CLEARLY I am NOT your target audience for something like this... all i can say is i did give it 2nd chance, and i read it fully keeping the picture in mind. all i kept thinking was ur rhyming wasn't really up to par compared to what im sure i've read out of u in the past.. u just had SUCH basic schemes that i also found this to be really boring, much like u found mine to be. hopefully u can get some better feed than this from some of the poetry heads here but yeah sorry bro, just not feeling this, my own taste though. if i were to like anything like this content wise, the word usage, syllable rhyming, and scheming would have to be FAR above average to hold my attention. this piece did not have that. like i say check my other one if u can, thx

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[Objective]

Originally Posted by CopyPat

if i were to like anything like this content wise, the word usage, syllable rhyming, and scheming would have to be FAR above average to hold my attention.

This is going to be my new challenge then, write something topicalistic/poetry-ish, but still hold your attention. When I think I've managed to write something like that I'll mention you if you're cool w/that? Thanks for checking it out and dropping some feed, I'll check out your piece after an episode of Dexter.