"Stone"

[Geno]

This was cool
Like wise said, had some rouggh areas flow wise -ssuch as..

but if you were to add just a chisel and sculpt
with unadulterated freedom of thought

That was rough to read after smooth syllable plays and transitions that came before it

The content/concepts were cool. Not of the norm, nor was it particularly interesting imo.. which perhaps may only be my opinion... but never the less.

Keep posting, baron