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10-07-2013, 08:32 AM
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Topic is a bit ... sensitive? For me I guess. But the flow due to shortened lines was differennt, and I would think rhyming would be more difficult considering the bars are condensced but you did your thing. Overall a solid verse with a very smooth readsprinkled with quit a bit of emotion. Nice drop
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