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Tell them what you really think, though.
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lmao right
yo i was feelin this a lot. interesting approach. totally dif styles but it helped in the balance of things. opening verse grabbed my attention immediately, flowing right from the picture provided. descriptive. liked the italics part as for vulgar, always killin it, always deep and thought-provoking. i dont know how you sort through so many concepts in your head and are able to put all that detail into one verse, it always amazes me. and like cake's opening verse, i dug the 2nd part of yours the best-- the ending. keep droppin shit like this, i'd like to hear this in audio if possible dont know why this was slept on |
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