War ain't easy, but it pays - Pancake & Vulgar
 

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First verse was very stirring, superbly sensational story telling,, the emotion remained true on the second read ,, good all around projection. . The projector showed your verse on the side of a bamboo house in some remote village ,, everybody sipped hot tea burning their mouths shouting "hot fiyah!!!!" That was a good verse , cake. . About time

Second verse followed capitalizing and going off on a terrific tangent, , the rebellion mach 1 free bird spirit read like an uprising of social commentary directed at the ozone of bozos ruling this planet...

Wu tang clan aint nuthin to fuck with

teddy bear ghost lol !!

Read cakes part but I'm tired and sick so I'll finish it tomorrow sometime blahh

Yo pancake you're forgiven for not posting mag. After reading this I truly believe you had too much on your plate because this is just ass cheeks. The story itself is stupid & boring, the delivery has no imagination, the piece lacks profundity, depth, wit and is void of all imagery good grief this was ass hair. Like why even put this shit out fellas? Vulgar you could've found someone else because this is an embarrassment.

Tell them what you really think, though.

omg @ that bitch in why ways' sig

lmao right


yo i was feelin this a lot. interesting approach. totally dif styles but it helped in the balance of things. opening verse grabbed my attention immediately, flowing right from the picture provided. descriptive. liked the italics part

as for vulgar, always killin it, always deep and thought-provoking. i dont know how you sort through so many concepts in your head and are able to put all that detail into one verse, it always amazes me. and like cake's opening verse, i dug the 2nd part of yours the best-- the ending. keep droppin shit like this, i'd like to hear this in audio if possible

dont know why this was slept on

Thanks, last up