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Frank · 10-04-2013, 02:08 AM

First verse was very stirring, superbly sensational story telling,, the emotion remained true on the second read ,, good all around projection. . The projector showed your verse on the side of a bamboo house in some remote village ,, everybody sipped hot tea burning their mouths shouting "hot fiyah!!!!" That was a good verse , cake. . About time

Second verse followed capitalizing and going off on a terrific tangent, , the rebellion mach 1 free bird spirit read like an uprising of social commentary directed at the ozone of bozos ruling this planet...

Wu tang clan aint nuthin to fuck with

10-04-2013, 02:08 AM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	First verse was very stirring, superbly sensational story telling,, the emotion remained true on the second read ,, good all around projection. . The projector showed your verse on the side of a bamboo house in some remote village ,, everybody sipped hot tea burning their mouths shouting "hot fiyah!!!!" That was a good verse , cake. . About time Second verse followed capitalizing and going off on a terrific tangent, , the rebellion mach 1 free bird spirit read like an uprising of social commentary directed at the ozone of bozos ruling this planet... Wu tang clan aint nuthin to fuck with __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 10-04-2013 at 02:10 AM.

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