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09-06-2013, 07:17 PM
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Om
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The assonance here is fuckin impressive dood. Usually people have trouble with that internal rhyming in that they let the words escape them and hold up the whole piece (i.e. lyrical miracle spherical spirituals) but you hold the reigns quite nicely. Maybe I cant appreciate the content in depth, but can see your technical ability and prowess. Great writing
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