Killer Mind from Strik's Perspective

Exis · 08-28-2013, 09:35 PM

Da devil has murderous ways, not to mention he's hurtin' w/ shame
Ur imperfections stand as lessons, questioning personal rage

Say I'm evil & demented, Jesus, how these ppl get offended
Tell ya bitch to suck on my penis & if I scream it's cuz I meant it
I don't need an intervention, reasons just for me to get defensive

Really liked the two sections I quoted, and definitely felt the second half to this more than the first...it just seemed to have more wit compared to the top part.The rest however was solid so to speak, at times you had a dope flow and I wasn't diggin' the content...then it would be vice versa but yeah as a whole I thought this was pretty good, had a few nice schemes and some of your multies were flames.

Stay upwards man.

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08-28-2013, 09:35 PM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Da devil has murderous ways, not to mention he's hurtin' w/ shame Ur imperfections stand as lessons, questioning personal rage Say I'm evil & demented, Jesus, how these ppl get offended Tell ya bitch to suck on my penis & if I scream it's cuz I meant it I don't need an intervention, reasons just for me to get defensive Really liked the two sections I quoted, and definitely felt the second half to this more than the first...it just seemed to have more wit compared to the top part.The rest however was solid so to speak, at times you had a dope flow and I wasn't diggin' the content...then it would be vice versa but yeah as a whole I thought this was pretty good, had a few nice schemes and some of your multies were flames. Stay upwards man.