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Strikta 08-25-2013 11:23 PM

Killer Mind from Strik's Perspective
 
Yo, real quick..

Yep son, I dump da nickel & fuckin' w/ me I'll burn ya dead
& turn ya head to nothin' but cheese spread ova' pumpernickel
That bad heart w/ track marks.. about to make da gat spark
Wearin' a cap? I'm tearin' it back how I can make ya hat part
All u make me mad, mark ass busters ain't no friends to me
Enemies, I'm Tarzan's cousin w/ da muzzle as I descend from trees
My hard hands troubled, it's from punchin' on everything I see
Punk motherfuckas just unlucky like a number when it was 10 + 3
Blarin' Jadakiss I'll take a shit, u bitches make me sick
Since u can't hold a candle, blow it out ya ass & make a wish
Cuz if dis is what u want.. listen, I just hit da fuckin' blunt
Off my rocker, Johnny Walker tellin' me to lift da pump & dump
Dis is a monster ignorance squasher, spit on a hypocrite, potna'
Slittin' a wrist, dripped in a pitcher & sippin' a vigilants lager
Da innocence slaughtered.. these niggas is pitiful martyrs
Sit in a ditch, bitch & moan as I stick dis dick in ya daughters
Da devil has murderous ways, not to mention he's hurtin' w/ shame
Ur imperfections stand as lessons, questioning personal rage
Merciful ways? Please, I get ya wife, put her on her dang knees
Should see ya sad look when I get my sperm on her face.. jeez
Say I'm evil & demented, Jesus, how these ppl get offended
Tell ya bitch to suck on my penis & if I scream it's cuz I meant it
I don't need an intervention, reasons just for me to get defensive
When I squeeze da friggin' Wesson u'd be bleedin' til ya death hits
Blood gurgling, love curdling, realizing breathing is a test, it's..
A difficult thing to pass, & this Earth.. u'll be leaving w/ an F, kid

YDK 08-26-2013 04:22 AM

Sperm on her face an bleeding till ya death hits bars were fire lol loved the whole drop tbh but those 2 bars were easily face the flow was clean an the multies were sick through the whole thing. Hell of a drop man def some solid shit. Keep droppin bruh

Witty 08-26-2013 09:14 AM

Fire tbh.

Tarzan's cousin line was illll.

Brain Thief 08-26-2013 12:44 PM

I thought it was pretty ill overall, however there were a few lines that detracted from the quality

Yep son, I dump da nickel & fuckin' w/ me I'll burn ya dead
& turn ya head to nothin' but cheese spread ova' pumpernickel

In my personal opinion, this is a poor opener for such a dope piece. I just don't feel it holds weight with the rest of the verse

That bad heart w/ track marks.. about to make da gat spark
Wearin' a cap? I'm tearin' it back how I can make ya hat part

Dope line, nice use of a multie, flows well

All u make me mad, mark ass busters ain't no friends to me
Enemies, I'm Tarzan's cousin w/ da muzzle as I descend from trees
My hard hands troubled, it's from punchin' on everything I see
Punk motherfuckas just unlucky like a number when it was 10 + 3

The Tarzan line wasn't bad, you executed it pretty well.
The next two bars were alright, I'm not feeling the last one at all though. It's basic mathematics combined with a setup. It's not that bad, just contrasts with the rest of the drop


Blarin' Jadakiss I'll take a shit, u bitches make me sick
Since u can't hold a candle, blow it out ya ass & make a wish

Dope shit, this is were the piece starts picking up in it's level of Ill

Cuz if dis is what u want.. listen, I just hit da fuckin' blunt
Off my rocker, Johnny Walker tellin' me to lift da pump & dump

Flow's on point, decent setup for the approaching onslaught of lyricism

Dis is a monster ignorance squasher, spit on a hypocrite, potna'
Slittin' a wrist, dripped in a pitcher & sippin' a vigilants lager
Da innocence slaughtered.. these niggas is pitiful martyrs
Sit in a ditch, bitch & moan as I stick dis dick in ya daughters

Dope scheme, The last line doesn't do it justice though, needs to end with something killer


Da devil has murderous ways, not to mention he's hurtin' w/ shame
Ur imperfections stand as lessons, questioning personal rage
Merciful ways? Please, I get ya wife, put her on her dang knees
Should see ya sad look when I get my sperm on her face.. jeez

The first two lines were sick as fuck, then the next two were kind of generic and not as original, switching the primary rhyme to an internal is nice, but you could have done it better.

Say I'm evil & demented, Jesus, how these ppl get offended
Tell ya bitch to suck on my penis & if I scream it's cuz I meant it
I don't need an intervention, reasons just for me to get defensive
When I squeeze da friggin' Wesson u'd be bleedin' til ya death hits
Blood gurgling, love curdling, realizing breathing is a test, it's..
A difficult thing to pass, & this Earth.. u'll be leaving w/ an F, kid

Sick multie and a good finish, the highlighted line deteriorates the quality a little but overall this was a dope drop. It has a lot of potential

Strikta 08-26-2013 02:53 PM

Will drop links shortly.

Geno 08-26-2013 09:10 PM

i didnt like this to much, iono. usually dig your shit.. just felt poorly executed and like it didnt have that 'i give a fuck about this piece' feel to it.

just my 2cents. nice to see a strikta OM for a change though

p.s.
links arent necessarey.. just go feed some shit and forget about the links.

Fig 08-26-2013 10:04 PM

Grimey ass, multi packed flex with some dope lines here and there. Sounds like and audio head lol. Na but this was coo, Tarzan and candle lines were my favorite. Keep droppin

Exis 08-28-2013 09:35 PM

Da devil has murderous ways, not to mention he's hurtin' w/ shame
Ur imperfections stand as lessons, questioning personal rage

Say I'm evil & demented, Jesus, how these ppl get offended
Tell ya bitch to suck on my penis & if I scream it's cuz I meant it
I don't need an intervention, reasons just for me to get defensive


Really liked the two sections I quoted, and definitely felt the second half to this more than the first...it just seemed to have more wit compared to the top part.The rest however was solid so to speak, at times you had a dope flow and I wasn't diggin' the content...then it would be vice versa but yeah as a whole I thought this was pretty good, had a few nice schemes and some of your multies were flames.

Stay upwards man.

Neighbor 08-28-2013 10:53 PM

Shit was hot, god


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