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08-22-2013, 06:22 AM
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el es a la mode
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this was cool for a few reasons. you used wit to strengthen and otherwise depressing and most narration and made it sound somewhat insightful. some good flow and and smooth delivery on a topic that we all can relate to as well. making fun of society is an easy target cuz this world is fucked up and has no intent to change. you captured that well
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