Galactic Fractals

PiE · 08-22-2013, 04:31 AM

the imagery in this was powerful. it started very strong with fire flow and drawing a scene that had me traveling on the stars. it lost some of that power, but this was still s great way to use an intellectual subject. topics like astronomy have been used to access universal knowledge and you shouted some of that here. very descriptive and s nice choice of words throughout, which made it a smooth and enjoyable read

08-22-2013, 04:31 AM	#9
PiE el es a la mode Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: slice of heaven Posts: 94 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	the imagery in this was powerful. it started very strong with fire flow and drawing a scene that had me traveling on the stars. it lost some of that power, but this was still s great way to use an intellectual subject. topics like astronomy have been used to access universal knowledge and you shouted some of that here. very descriptive and s nice choice of words throughout, which made it a smooth and enjoyable read __________________

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