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Old 08-22-2013, 01:54 AM   #4
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You're driven by your rhymes, which is pretty cool, but it does lead to a wild mix of quality in the individual lines themselves. Following the corny lion line with the much stronger Suge line is a good example. The content sputtered in the second half, too. It seems whenever I read your verses that you have a ton of talent but write really quickly, unworried about polishing your verses. That's fine and certainly a reasonable choice, one I'm guilty of at times. But it leads to that chonic unevenness.
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