Audio Writing

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This was dope. @namix

I think you rhyme waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many syllables tho.....

It almost sounds nursery rhyme-ish because you use so many multis.


Audio and Text, Apples and Oranges...

Try to dumb down your verse a little bit in your audio, and I think it will come off much smoother.

You just have to find your comfort zone w/ a mic, then you can start to switch shit up. Think simple... People's attention spans can't soak up all those syllables and wordplay w/ such a monotonous flow.

Possibly experiment w/ the way you spit each verse... For example, how ludacris changes his voice volume or tone... Or you can fuck w/ how fast you rhyme.

Def experiment w/ using different end rhymes... rhyming less syllables... Putting more emotion into the way you spit it, and diversifying your flow and delivery.