Therapy Session (Collabo w/Veritas)

Vulgar · 08-14-2013, 02:42 PM

@Objective, you approached this calmly, expressively, but it didn't fully connect with me because I guess I'm a sucker for rampant details. I feel like your writing is getting there, and it could very well be there already but this is my present opinion. Put an unmistakable 'touch' on your ideas; your concepts have always been as solid as the object you personify. I think your projected energy needs some work. Get the reader more involved. We are the blind man and you are the guiding canine. Show us the way to an out of body experience, psychiatry style.

@VERITAS, this succeeded because you convinced me you knew what you were talking about, so it immediately categorized itself as a commodity. I thought back to when you posted your Ph.D memorandum (in the wake of PicardGate) so overall, it was a gentle psyche evaluation, introductory in nature since I am assuming this was the first session of a series of meetings, should you both decide to expand on it.

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08-14-2013, 02:42 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	@Objective, you approached this calmly, expressively, but it didn't fully connect with me because I guess I'm a sucker for rampant details. I feel like your writing is getting there, and it could very well be there already but this is my present opinion. Put an unmistakable 'touch' on your ideas; your concepts have always been as solid as the object you personify. I think your projected energy needs some work. Get the reader more involved. We are the blind man and you are the guiding canine. Show us the way to an out of body experience, psychiatry style. @VERITAS, this succeeded because you convinced me you knew what you were talking about, so it immediately categorized itself as a commodity. I thought back to when you posted your Ph.D memorandum (in the wake of PicardGate) so overall, it was a gentle psyche evaluation, introductory in nature since I am assuming this was the first session of a series of meetings, should you both decide to expand on it. Vote - Sanity Keep doing you