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Old 08-06-2013, 02:01 AM   #1
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Damn nice! I've seen Veritas stuff, and see he still at it (damn ver, how long you been doin this anyway?) and still craning out some dope ass lines. Impressed at the flow and imagery in both drops... my favorite bar: "No secrets exposed except those society demanded, there's times my mind contracted, then suddenly expanded." I just love the flow and sound of that, it's like "yea, I know, i been there"... sweet

I loved the patient/therapist angle and I really liked the way Veritas rapped it all up at the end:

But as your therapist I have the beginning of the answers you seek…..
humanity aint the problem, it is our thinking that our problems are unique.


AWESOME job on both your parts!
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Damn nice! I've seen Veritas stuff, and see he still at it (damn ver, how long you been doin this anyway?) and still craning out some dope ass lines. Impressed at the flow and imagery in both drops... my favorite bar: "No secrets exposed except those society demanded, there's times my mind contracted, then suddenly expanded." I just love the flow and sound of that, it's like "yea, I know, i been there"... sweet

I loved the patient/therapist angle and I really liked the way Veritas rapped it all up at the end:

But as your therapist I have the beginning of the answers you seek…..
humanity aint the problem, it is our thinking that our problems are unique.


AWESOME job on both your parts!

thanks for the feed guys. props to Obj for coming up with this and making it tight.

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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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thanks for the feed guys. props to Obj for coming up with this and making it tight.

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From quite a few sites, You've been doing this for at least 5 years, wth was that site you were on a couple years back, it closed down... damn... well, I know you been on a few sites, or at least someone named veritas who is a very talented artist has been on a few sites and I can only assume it's you (or someone who writes an awful lot like you and has the same name)... damn what was that damn site... I'll remember it later... anyway, enjoying your writing, keep it up bro...


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