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07-23-2013, 06:38 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Be good if you broke up your shit a little...everythin' seems to just run on and into stuff alot durin' sentences...there's heaps to like though...thought the first line and how you ended things were nice no doubt, overall it's enjoyable.
...Stay uppity. |
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