If I Could Visit My Past Self

Mike Wrecka · 11-30-2024, 04:17 PM

You’re kind of moving into poetry at this point. Well getting close. This shit is actually a bit of a mind fuck. Telling your past self to kill themselves. Why not just off yourself in the present ? Perhaps because now there are people that rely on you so you can’t end things. And then knowing your former self is ignoring you , meaning you never thought or cared about the future. Really captivating themes going on here. Your writing has gotten more simplistic in its rhyming but deeper and more thought provoking. Thanks for the read

11-30-2024, 04:17 PM	#2
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	You’re kind of moving into poetry at this point. Well getting close. This shit is actually a bit of a mind fuck. Telling your past self to kill themselves. Why not just off yourself in the present ? Perhaps because now there are people that rely on you so you can’t end things. And then knowing your former self is ignoring you , meaning you never thought or cared about the future. Really captivating themes going on here. Your writing has gotten more simplistic in its rhyming but deeper and more thought provoking. Thanks for the read __________________ A.bove T.he R.est