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Old 08-12-2022, 03:45 AM   #25
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Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
I’ve read the champ battle. Here’s the thing.

- There was no clear winner to me
- The verses are very long, so it would take me a long time to analyze them more thoroughly to determine who I really thought took it, but
- I honestly found both verses an absolute fucking chore to read through even once and I have no desire to reread either of them more closely

So, I don’t know what to do with that...

...Vote = lower the line limits
I've felt this way so many times about text matches in the writing leagues.
I don't feel like making a detailed criticism of both verses, of why I didn't like either verse, that could make both parties feel pretty bad. And who was less bad? And longgggg.

@Universe props man your votes are sometimes the highlight of the friggin link. And I may have skimmed that verse you mentioned that you said was the best of the season but I will give it a proper read this weekend.

I've only peeped about 2-3 weeks out of these 15.
I've realized I don't even like topical writing.Or traditional battle verses.
Just wanna write a few songs.

Random notes:
Read the @dead man verse last week.
we hustled our dope relentlessly
while our enemies were shaving up soap, calling it ketamine
benzodiazepine, potent and sniff
if you're on patrol, you know what it is

-best part IMO

I'm not an elitist just reading dead man and Universe. And earlier Dominate & Eviction. When I'm more free I will try to catch up on reading some more weeks of everyone.
I did read this Frank-NYC champ match.
Both great rhymers but both could come up with way better material. Sorry, I don' t have a winner so Rock better explain his vote.

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