WEEK FIFTEEN: ADVERSE (6-4) vs NIGMA (0-0) ADVERSE WINS 5-2

Mike Wrecka · 08-07-2022, 10:51 AM

Cool battle. So did you guys mutually agree to old school center your verses and use bold and italics ? Really visually gave off a early 2000s vibe here.

Adverse- you’ve gotten noticeably better as the season has progressed. I feel like we are watching the evolution of a writer right before our eyes. He’s the young buck that’s been reading all of us old timers verses all season long and learning from each of us. I know you’ve been in previous seasons but I doubt they had the heavy hitters you are being exposed to now. There’s a transfer of knowledge happening here and it’s awesome. Through hard work you have graduated from apprentice to full fledged technician in one of the least useful endeavors one can undertake. Congrats. Anyway

The verse was great. Really liked it. A minor hiccup here and there but they were minor. You’re big mistake as we all know was ruining your big reveal with a meme. Took away all the impact and took a great verse and made it a very good verse. Still good work.

Nigma- you displayed what a lot of us put forth when first returning from a prolonged hiatus. Good flow and mechanics. A technically sound verse with some nice imagery and flowery words that ultimately doesn’t lead anywhere. It was the same for me this season six verses ago. Tell a narrative that’s what I want to read. And it’s ultimately harder to write. Making pretty words rhyme is easy mode. You have some rust to knock off as we all did/do

Good battle. Nice read. Enjoyed both.

Vote - Adverse

08-07-2022, 10:51 AM	#9
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Cool battle. So did you guys mutually agree to old school center your verses and use bold and italics ? Really visually gave off a early 2000s vibe here. Adverse- you’ve gotten noticeably better as the season has progressed. I feel like we are watching the evolution of a writer right before our eyes. He’s the young buck that’s been reading all of us old timers verses all season long and learning from each of us. I know you’ve been in previous seasons but I doubt they had the heavy hitters you are being exposed to now. There’s a transfer of knowledge happening here and it’s awesome. Through hard work you have graduated from apprentice to full fledged technician in one of the least useful endeavors one can undertake. Congrats. Anyway The verse was great. Really liked it. A minor hiccup here and there but they were minor. You’re big mistake as we all know was ruining your big reveal with a meme. Took away all the impact and took a great verse and made it a very good verse. Still good work. Nigma- you displayed what a lot of us put forth when first returning from a prolonged hiatus. Good flow and mechanics. A technically sound verse with some nice imagery and flowery words that ultimately doesn’t lead anywhere. It was the same for me this season six verses ago. Tell a narrative that’s what I want to read. And it’s ultimately harder to write. Making pretty words rhyme is easy mode. You have some rust to knock off as we all did/do Good battle. Nice read. Enjoyed both. Vote - Adverse __________________ A.bove T.he R.est