WEEK FIFTEEN: MIKE WRECKA (3-2) vs RAWN MD (1-1) MIKE WRECKA WINS 4-2

Adverse · 08-06-2022, 12:11 PM

This was a pretty good matchup. Thought both stories were good in their own right, topic looked more optimistic to me than you two portrayed, both stories ended with the demise of the character but for wildly differing reasons. Let’s dig in.

Rawn -
Your style takes some getting used to, the imagery is vague and up to this point the narrative had kind of taken a backseat. But I think that changed here a little bit, loved the things you described they were really dystopian cypher punk vibes, and funny how you turned the scene of this photo into such a violent one with the cat acting in animalistic instinct and attacking its owner and all he can do as he fades away is worry about the cat. Thought that was pretty good and kind of speaks to how humans operate vs animals, found that to be pretty cool honestly. Good drop.

Mike
This was a weird style, super stretched lines packed with rhymes. It was okay but towards the end it started to wear on me like it made the story feel like it was being dragged out. The scenes you were describing were decent enough, and I liked the concept of a man buried in debt, homeless and just living in the rafters of this huge Japanese city. The ending was kinda expected but the fashion it happened in was enough to keep us on our toes. So that was good.

I think I’d roll with Rawn here as well, his story wasn’t necessarily better but it flowed with a lot more fluidly and the progression was just better. This was a pretty good battle though

V/Rawn

08-06-2022, 12:11 PM	#8
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	This was a pretty good matchup. Thought both stories were good in their own right, topic looked more optimistic to me than you two portrayed, both stories ended with the demise of the character but for wildly differing reasons. Let’s dig in. Rawn - Your style takes some getting used to, the imagery is vague and up to this point the narrative had kind of taken a backseat. But I think that changed here a little bit, loved the things you described they were really dystopian cypher punk vibes, and funny how you turned the scene of this photo into such a violent one with the cat acting in animalistic instinct and attacking its owner and all he can do as he fades away is worry about the cat. Thought that was pretty good and kind of speaks to how humans operate vs animals, found that to be pretty cool honestly. Good drop. Mike This was a weird style, super stretched lines packed with rhymes. It was okay but towards the end it started to wear on me like it made the story feel like it was being dragged out. The scenes you were describing were decent enough, and I liked the concept of a man buried in debt, homeless and just living in the rafters of this huge Japanese city. The ending was kinda expected but the fashion it happened in was enough to keep us on our toes. So that was good. I think I’d roll with Rawn here as well, his story wasn’t necessarily better but it flowed with a lot more fluidly and the progression was just better. This was a pretty good battle though V/Rawn