WEEK THREE: DOMINATE (2-0) vs BROKENHAL0 (2-0) DOM WINS 4-2

Master Rock · 04-11-2022, 08:37 PM

This was overall a very dope battle. Broken when in depth sharing a dirty dark twisted tale with many branches reaching in multiple areas. There were times where I felt a faltered in certain areas. But then it was times when he brought it back and flexed his abilities. There were times that I felt that his rhyming wasn't hitting at the right spots and that made it harder for me to engage. Dom on the other hand had a smooth flow throughout. And his story was concise and very clear as well as engaging throughout. I followed the whole thing and really got engaged in the whole conversation between the characters. It was as though I felt the picture come alive. Especially on a part when he mentions the journey and unworthy part. That's when it captured me. Honestly I have to give this to Dom for engagement and Flow. They both did good but Dom hit the nail on the head. Dope job both of you.

04-11-2022, 08:37 PM	#7
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	This was overall a very dope battle. Broken when in depth sharing a dirty dark twisted tale with many branches reaching in multiple areas. There were times where I felt a faltered in certain areas. But then it was times when he brought it back and flexed his abilities. There were times that I felt that his rhyming wasn't hitting at the right spots and that made it harder for me to engage. Dom on the other hand had a smooth flow throughout. And his story was concise and very clear as well as engaging throughout. I followed the whole thing and really got engaged in the whole conversation between the characters. It was as though I felt the picture come alive. Especially on a part when he mentions the journey and unworthy part. That's when it captured me. Honestly I have to give this to Dom for engagement and Flow. They both did good but Dom hit the nail on the head. Dope job both of you. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz Last edited by Master Rock; 04-12-2022 at 08:55 PM.