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10-29-2020, 12:29 PM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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This was cool I liked your flow throughout had good multis and I loved the contrast from scenario to scenario this was a good ode to growing up
BUT that last line almost ruined the whole piece, that was some Sinacog level shit, be better man Other than that good work |
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